When I read the prequel to the Embattled series “Embattled Roads” I was really looking forward to the first book, but I was disappointed.
Neither the romance, nor the suspense story worked for me 100%.
Romance: I did not connect with the characters at all. There was a point where I thought, now we’re talking, but soon after it went downhill. On John’s part tt was basically whining internally about how useless he was in protecting Shannon and on Shannons part tearing up about whatever. The fact that John went from 100% misanthrope (apart from a few people he did still dislike people in general by the end of the book) to a guy who continuously pulled Shannon on his lap was just not believable. Plus, I consider sitting on someone’s lap neither particularly sexy, nor heartwarming, nor romantic.
Also there were too many kittens. I don’t like pets or children in romance as they are very often used as a sort of catalyst. OK, John strokes kittens like there’s no tomorrow, fine. I’m not impressed. It is no voucher for a person’s loveable nature or good character that they like pets or stroke kittens.
Suspense: I can’t say I am a big fan of stalker stories and don’t read a lot of them. So I can’t judge whether that angle was done particularly well. But the reason to stalk and threaten in the first place was far fetched and preposterous. John and Shannon made the stalking quite easy, too, at least on one occasion. You would think that knowing that there is a stalker around watching you would make sure you close the blinds on your bedroom window, wouldn’t you? The guy with the camera must have had a field day!
I liked the secondary characters, most of all Zeke, and I was looking forward to the second book which is his story. But I am afraid I will have to give it a miss as I have read that there are even more kittens AND a kid in it – and am afraid that will be much too sugary sweet for me to handle.
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