The title of this made me curious and the cover wasn’t too shabby either, so I went for it.
H and h were both good and likeable characters, even though I could have done with a little less focus on his being British. So what if he’s a Brit?! Both stood their ground but didn’t play silly games once it was obvious they were attracted to each other. The conflict around the middle when they have an argument about the boy breaking his wrist was totally believable to me (a novelty, as most conflicts in romance are silly, far-fetched or only exist in the head of one of the characters).
However, there were a few things that were just too much or didn’t make sense.
- Why send Matilda to find a wife for her brother in law. If the grandfather was so concerned about his grandchildren why not just have an agency screen various nannies and provide a few candidates to choose from? To force the son-in-law to remarry, otherwise he’ll lose the farm, is just a bit too much tyranny.
- Why did Everit object to Matilda being that wife. He presumably didn’t care for her so what does it matter to him whom she marries. For Balthazar he would have accepted anybody anyway, as it seems. And if he did care for her, wouldn’t he want her to find happiness with the love of her life?
- The bee stings were just too much. Give me a bloody break!
- The mother turning up and being welcomed like the prodigal son. You would think that the son has SOME issues to overcome before he can accept her as his mother.
- The dead fiancé suddenly being alive before he finally dies for good. The nurse lied about Cort being dead. Why? You would assume because she was told to by Cort’s parents who never liked Matilda. So why, oh, why would they call her after all this time to let her know he has awoken from his coma and has been asking for her? They were rid of her and now they ask her to come back? They could have told Cort that she left him and good riddance. That final conflict was contrived to the extreme, made no sense whatsoever and felt as if it was thrown in as a final test to the relationship because everything had been going a bit too smooth until then.
- The end was a just too perfect. I’m not going into any details, but the fact that really everything and everybody turned out just great was a bit too much of a good thing.
Nevertheless, this was an entertaining read. If you like sweet and crazy stories with a bit of humour and a downright fairytale ending this will be for you.
I received a copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.