This would have been a good story if the heroine hadn’t been such a doormat. A doormat that curses like a pro and continuously gets on her neighbour’s nerves with her teasing behaviour. While I can’t stand heroines who go about as if they were the best thing since sliced bread, I hate heroines even more who go around thinking they have no worth. She was annoying to watch. Isn’t there no middle ground?
Verna and Joe went from a like/hate relationship to a passionate affair filled with lust in a heartbeat. What changed both their mindes? No clue!
I kind of liked Verna’s first reaction to Joe’s abhorrent behaviour. Acting as if it hadn’t happened and going back to being just superficial “friends” (and, of course, she convinces herself that what happened was something ordinary because she didn’t deserve better) isn’t something I could have pulled off but it hit Joe harder than accusations would have done. But then what does she do just a little later? She forgives him his really unspeakable actions because he says he loves her! As if loving someone made up for anything. His half assed apology didn’t cut it at all! But for Verna it turns the day around to be the best day ever. Wow, she is easy to placate. I would have made that bastard grovel until the earth opened up before him, but she’s ok with a “sorry, I know I was an asshole and I shouldn’t have done it”.
Somebody pointed out before me that her list of demands as to what she expects of him in the future is laughable. What she asks of him (and he naturally and readily agrees to because it won’t require any effort) are the most basic, goes without saying, not even worth mentioning things a relationship is made of. The mere fact that she has to ask for them and that he answers “deal” as if this was actually something to make a deal about is proof that this relationship is based on something so wrong that I can’t even find words for it.
All in all, a quick read which left a sort of bad taste because of the unbalanced nature of the final outcome.